Why this one is different from every other application essay

In college admissions the personal statement sits inside a thick file — supplements, activities, recommendations, a counselor letter. In law admissions it is usually alone. Two pages, double spaced, and at most schools nothing else qualitative. Your numbers do the sorting; the statement is the only place a human learns anything about you that the spreadsheet did not already say.

That raises the stakes on a decision most applicants make badly: what the essay is about. The default is a narrated résumé, or the moment you decided to become a lawyer. Committees read thousands of both. They have read the mock trial one, the immigration story one, the injustice-witnessed-at-sixteen one.

What they have not read is yours, told the way you would actually tell it.

The addendum is not the personal statement, and mixing them costs you

A soft semester, a low score, a gap, a disciplinary note — those belong in an addendum, stated plainly and briefly, without apology or narrative. Applicants who instead build the personal statement around explaining a weakness spend their only two pages on defense.

We separate them. The addendum handles the fact. The statement does the work only it can do.

What I bring that a general essay coach does not

A Georgetown Law degree, and a first year spent at Case Western before I transferred — so I have sat on both sides of a law school application.
A working legal journalist's ear. I won the American Bar Association's Silver Gavel Award for a series on affirmative action and was a finalist for one on the FTC's non-compete proposal. I read legal writing all day and I can tell when a sentence is hiding.
Experience with the "why this school" essays, diversity statements, and the addenda that most applicants either skip or overwrite.

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One menu, every kind of application

There is no separate graduate rate and no separate professional-school package. The packages on the main page apply to any application that asks for a personal statement. Longer engagements cost more only because they contain more essays, not because of the degree.*